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The fireplace blazed in a light glow. Staring at it, I began to wonder if this was a good idea. Everything I felt for Alex….all coming out tonight. It felt surreal. It also felt tedious as to be not sure to his reaction. A knock on the front door startled me. Be calm, I thought as I stood up and slowly walked to the door. I made a quick check in the mirror just to ure that my looks wouldn’t speak for themselves. I grabbed the handle and taking a deep breath, I opened the door. The sight of him made me almost collapse in excitement. “Hey. Thanks for coming.” He did his hair which was a bit of a shocker since he was so not into doing it. He wore Express, which overall meant he cared about how he looked. He came in, sweeping ped me and letting a slight masculine scent of cologne spark thoughts of indecency in me. I can control myself, right? I can. He turned around and looked right at me. I met his gaze and smiled sweetly. He smiled back then took on a more serious look. “Look, I actually came to tell you something” he said with a surprising amount of emotion. He stepped closer while I took a step back, hitting the wall. Trembling for control, while still keeping a straight face, I answered “Oh, about what exactly?” I was surprised my voice wasn’t shrieking in eagerness. His cold hand took mine and the shock registered to my face. I looked down just as he was bringing our hands up to our chests. His face inched closer to mine and his lips, just an inch apart from mine, whispered “I love you.” I gasped just when he kissed me, lightly, but then more fiercely with undeniable pion. He wrapped his arms around my waist and held me so tight, I couldn’t think of anything else but him. I unpaired from his lips and, breathing heavily while still staring in his hungry eyes, I whispered “Let’s go upstairs.” I took his hand and slowly guided him up. His other hand snaked its way around my waist again. Facing away from him, I grinned just thinking about what’s to come.